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A bit of a teaser, I found a woman who bears a stricking resemblance to what Gwen looks like in her late teens/early twenties.

Picture here

If you've been paying attention at all, this'll probably make you raise your eyebrows a bit.

*giggle*

That's all.

on 2007-07-21 03:09 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] safilix-shark.livejournal.com
I thought Gwen had black hair... dun dun dunnnn.

on 2007-07-21 05:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] axeslade.livejournal.com
Oh you're quick ~_^

Yeah...I'd been having these weird conflicting images of her ever since she first showed up in my head, sometimes with dark hair, other times with blonde. The other day, I finally figured out why.

God this thing's gonna eat my brain, I know it.

on 2007-07-21 05:14 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] axeslade.livejournal.com
btw, what've you thought of what you've read? I'm disregarding Bri's crit, as she's utterly in love with Gwen so is pretty much incapable of giving real crit.

on 2007-07-21 04:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by (Anonymous)
Are you sure you want my crit? hahaha.

Naw I don't really have any qualms about it. The only thing I saw was that it sort of started out the same way a lot of your stories do; first person male narrative, leading into a flashback. But! It's a nit-picky style thing that's not really important.

I want to know what or who is talking to Gwen. grrr *fist shake*

on 2007-07-21 05:01 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] axeslade.livejournal.com
Are you sure you want my crit? hahaha
Ha. You're the only person I get real crit from, and I like that, as much as the girls may not.

first person male narrative, leading into a flashback

I actually wanted to do it in complete third person, in my opinion I SUCK at first person (it's insanely hard for me to write), but this story requires I do it occasionally. I may twist things around so it's not so much flashback, not sure yet.

As to what's talking to Gwen...once I finally write a scene that's supposed to go in between two others, it'll be insanely obvious. I hope. There's some things that need fixed in regards to that to. The scene that took place when she was three is completely wrong.

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