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[axeslade]

You know, no matter how long you've been writing or how often you say you want honest crit, you truly don't. Heh.

Still, love Charlie for being a brutal bitch when she needs to be. There are MANY improvements to be made based on her crit. If ANYONE sees something, please let me know. She may have missed something. I haven't had an impartial edit until now as there was no one around to do it, thus me throwing up my hands and going 'it's as good as it's getting, fuck it all, take it or leave it'. I'm going to take it down COMPLETELY within the week to be completely shredded again.

When it's back, it'll be better. I swear on...umm...on my Highlander books, may they burst into flames if I fail.

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[safilix-shark.livejournal.com]

Oh dear. I hope it wasn't too harsh. I actually tried to... oh well. I guess if it helped, then that's good.

[axeslade.livejournal.com]

You weren't hun. You know how fragile the girls' egos can be ~_^ You actually brought up a lot of stuff I'd thought of after the fact.

Love you.