and the painful editing begins...

[axeslade]

argh, huge old plot hole.

You want to know what's wrong with me? The fact that I'm stuck between two equally wonderful men, one of whom refuses to give me any time to get over the other.’

argggh. I eitehr have to work that into the dialouge or...arr. course I just got done taking a test (know I bomed) so this is just great. argh.

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[safilix-shark.livejournal.com]

Hmmm Where's the plot hole? The Tom/James thingy?

[axeslade.livejournal.com]

keep forgetting you haven't read what I wrote recently...in my rewritten version of the breakup(as it currently is) Amy doesn't say that. I have to work it in or take that out of the beginning. agh.