How does your heart beat, how do you cry?

[axeslade]

Last night the muses remembered that MS Word has a highlighter tool, so I've started highlighting changes I want to make in PAYD. Not everything that I turned yellow will be cut or changed (because other wise the last seven chapters will turn into two), but it'll at least get another look. Also, I finally sat down and really listened to the Lisa Loeb album I've had for a year or two and fell in love.

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[safilix-shark.livejournal.com]

What are the plot knots, dude? Maybe I can help untangle them? SOMEHOW?! :O

[axeslade.livejournal.com]

lol. maybe I can send you the file where I've highlighted crap. mostly..for one, the girls are thinking Angela and Candi need to go, or to have their parts rewritten seriously, they just don't fit in quite right. And then there's a load of other crap that's just too much for me to think about right now.