How does your heart beat, how do you cry?

[axeslade]

Last night the muses remembered that MS Word has a highlighter tool, so I've started highlighting changes I want to make in PAYD. Not everything that I turned yellow will be cut or changed (because other wise the last seven chapters will turn into two), but it'll at least get another look. Also, I finally sat down and really listened to the Lisa Loeb album I've had for a year or two and fell in love.

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What are the plot knots, dude? Maybe I can help untangle them? SOMEHOW?! :O