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I alone will choose the moment
Just wrote 3 1/2 ish pages (1252 words) on IAOB. I'm not sure if this snip will go in the main story, but it definitely was helpful. I learned a lot. Like..
1. Irving. I love you, really I do. But you earned what you got in the afterlife. I'm not saying you didn't think what you were doing was the right thing. You tried really hard, and you thought you were being selfless. But breaking promises to someone with trust issues? Really?
2. You really need to learn from the past. That scene alone totally explains why Bailey acts the way he does later. I'm just glad that by the end of IAOB you have learned, but it should not have taken so damn long.
3. ...really, that's it in a nutshell. Now, go have dinner with your man and dance with him and screw his brains out. You've both earned it.
1. Irving. I love you, really I do. But you earned what you got in the afterlife. I'm not saying you didn't think what you were doing was the right thing. You tried really hard, and you thought you were being selfless. But breaking promises to someone with trust issues? Really?
2. You really need to learn from the past. That scene alone totally explains why Bailey acts the way he does later. I'm just glad that by the end of IAOB you have learned, but it should not have taken so damn long.
3. ...really, that's it in a nutshell. Now, go have dinner with your man and dance with him and screw his brains out. You've both earned it.