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A most peculiar mademoiselle ([personal profile] axeslade) wrote2005-07-28 10:38 pm

umm, yeah

this is a little improvish thing I wrote while listening to Tori and trying (and failing) to write Chapter 6. I guess you could call it a trippy ticked off letter to the muses.

white
white white white
all I see is white
not black
smack
whack
big old block
ouch
something's sleeping
wake up
c'mon I need you now
give me something
anything
okay you gave me this
messy
sloppy
ick
but I want more
not brown and water
honey please
slippy slidy gold
sweet and fragrant
not…
this
this A to C and D
but where's B?
she's visiting E
I think
can't you give me pink?
not gray blah
but pretty fields?
B has those
bring her here
we need to chat
about that
I can stick my tongue out too
fine
I'll wait
where's my lipgloss?

[identity profile] lifebytes-yaya.livejournal.com 2005-07-29 05:30 am (UTC)(link)
that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!1

[identity profile] axeslade.livejournal.com 2005-07-29 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
teehee, thanks. I'm not used to writing such disjointed stuff, even my freefor poetry always has a theme running through it. this was....hmm, I need to check the muses' stash to see if they're doing more hallucinogens then I thought.